Wow, that was really beautiful. I would've liked for a few more boxes to have been looked through, other than just Jack and Mickey's. But I think that's just my fanwanky self talking, it would've veered the story off track. Nah, you did beautifully. I loved him breathing her scent and almost folding the sweater, so lovely. <3
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Date: 2008-12-04 09:06 pm (UTC)