Someone has already offered to read it for me, but if you're still interested I'd love a third opinion. :D Congrats on being done with yours! (I've been meaning to read your Purity one, just haven't gotten around to it yet with all the crap going on right now. *sigh* This real life health crap has put me seriously behind on my J2 and Wincest stories. And really, that's just unforgivable.)

So, do you still want me to send this revision to you when I'm finished with it? (hopefully within the next two days, if I can get my ass in gear.)