I read 1,2 and 4, very well done on all three. I liked very much the excellent points you raised in each piece.
1. i loved Sarah's resignation. I love that her cynicism isn't a mask for some fervent optimism. She's fighting because there's nothing else to do. Not becuase she's a believer.
2. This one was brave. I love dthat you explored the idea that John might actually be glad that the machine replaced the girl, that the machine is the one he knows. Excellent.
4. Derek's musings on dying for John Connor were also quite brave. I loved the why not? I loved the idea that, in their own way, the soldiers who die are using John as much as he is using him.
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1. i loved Sarah's resignation. I love that her cynicism isn't a mask for some fervent optimism. She's fighting because there's nothing else to do. Not becuase she's a believer.
2. This one was brave. I love dthat you explored the idea that John might actually be glad that the machine replaced the girl, that the machine is the one he knows. Excellent.
4. Derek's musings on dying for John Connor were also quite brave. I loved the why not? I loved the idea that, in their own way, the soldiers who die are using John as much as he is using him.
Great work. Thanks for writing.