/dies.

You're my favorite person in the entire world.

You are a goddess, and my god, those freaking ITALICS you do!! =D

I love what you did with the tallying and the "--and Griffin moaned. “I love it when you break my skin,” he whispered and David shivered."

I now have goosebumps and happy dreams for the next week.

And good job with Millie-- people either cut her down and out in order to rush the Griffin/David, or they overdo her to try avoiding doing just that and making it seem more natural. You did it just the right way, and the end! WOW.

Griffin's 'Why?' It goes to show just how obsessed he really is, how nothing else can have meaning to him since he based his entire existence on it. It shows how damaged he is, that really doesn't understand what David wants from him because he can't see what David sees in him.

I WORSHIP YOU.