::whimper:: ;__; That was.... fucking magnificent. It really was. I'm glad you shared this with the comm. ^_^ And I really hope to see more of your writing in the future.

favorite line: "Before him." It's just so perfectly succinct... It pulls all the building emotion into one bright, blazing point of light and meaning.

Marvelous. You illustrated that Griffin feels as trapped by David as by anything else, but you don't shove the point down the reader's throat. Great job.

♥ Sin