http://sycophantastic.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sycophantastic.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aisalynn 2010-07-17 10:57 am (UTC)

I generally don't read J2, but I really enjoyed this. You definitely gave real depth & history to the family dynamic, great little details & stories, made me believe there was real warmth & love there. And good move with the mistletoe, I love a well-placed "well prove it with a kiss" to get the main characters caught up with their own emotions. The sex scene was done really really well, thought I'd let you know. :)

All in all, this was definitely entertaining & fairly adorable. Again, I don't read much J2, but I think fun fics like this could get me into 'em.

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