I thoroughly enjoyed the ending to this entertaining piece. Chad's phone call set the tone for a less than happy end to this kidnapping and you delivered it beautifully. Of course Jensen would feel angry and betrayed. Jared had seemed to be a good guy. A good, honest guy. Unlike Chad who appears to be an unrepentant screw up of the first order.

Chad returning the money shows that Jensen was right about Jared. I think a first date is a good place to start. A first date in handcuffs!

Thanks for sharing this. It was a great read.